the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
the maps give us information about development in the bookstore in 2000 and recent time ,
overall
it can be seen that the noticeable change is the replacemnet
at the top of Correct your spelling
replacement
plan
which they add
more subjects .
refers to bookstore in 2000, at the right of the plan
there was a fiction
room
where was joined with a nother big fiction
room
at the top of the map ,by contrast
at the bottoom of the plan
there was non-fiction
and service
desk at the left corner ,moreoverat the middle of the map there were cookery,hobbes as well as
art rooms where was located infront of the fiction
room
.futhermore travel service
and one room
for new book have constructed behind service
desk .
this
paln has being developed now , they are going to relocate the cookery ,hobbies. also
art room
from ot the middel of the bookstore to top of the map however
, size of room
fiction
will be smaller then
the size of it in 2000. instead
rooms that they are shifting they put tables at the middle . another change has being done in the bottom of the plan
which they are add cafe next to desk service
which remain at the same place , new books room
and travel room
as such
reamin unchanged .Submitted by dler_shakar on
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