the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
the maps give us information about development in the bookstore in 2000 and recent time ,
overall
it can be seen that the noticeable change is the
replacemnet
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replacement
at the top of
plan
which they add  more subjects . refers to bookstore in 2000, at the right of the
plan
there was a
fiction
room
where was joined with a nother big
fiction
room
at the top of the map ,
by contrast
at the bottoom of the
plan
there was non-
fiction
and
service
desk at the left corner ,moreoverat the middle of the map there were cookery,hobbes
as well as
art rooms where was located infront of the
fiction
room
.futhermore travel
service
and one
room
for new book have constructed behind
service
desk .
this
paln has being developed now , they are going to relocate the cookery ,hobbies.
also
art
room
from ot the middel of the bookstore to top of the map
however
, size of
room
fiction
will be smaller
then
the size of it in 2000.
instead
rooms that they are shifting they put tables at the middle . another change has being done in the bottom of the
plan
which they are add cafe next to desk
service
which remain at the same place , new books
room
and travel
room
as
such
reamin unchanged .
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, fiction, room, service with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • changes
  • occurred
  • transformations
  • developments
  • span
  • visual
  • comparison
  • illustrates
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