The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The presented diagram delineates the percentage of four actions which were done by adults
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their free time in 1985 and 1995. In general, it is conspicuous that both in 1985 and
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1995 the most popular activity was watching
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television. Turning to the top two highest
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of actions, watching television was the most
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option selected by people in the time observed periods,
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32% in 1995 and 30% in 1995.
In addition
, in 1985 eating out contributed 23% and took the second highest place;
however
, after 10 years,
this
position was replaced by playing computer games (27%),
then
ending at the fifth position (8%). As regards the rest of the categories, talking with friends contributed 21% in 1985, and
then
increased slightly by 5% in 1995.
Additionally
, there was an interesting point that playing computer games became
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for mature people at just
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a quarter in the end period even though it was nothing in the beginning.
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