The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

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The presented diagram delineates the percentage of four actions which were done by adults

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their free time in 1985 and 1995. In general, it is conspicuous that both in 1985 and

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1995 the most popular activity was watching

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television. Turning to the top two highest

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of actions, watching television was the most

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option selected by people in the time observed periods,

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32% in 1995 and 30% in 1995.

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, in 1985 eating out contributed 23% and took the second highest place;

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, after 10 years,

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position was replaced by playing computer games (27%),

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ending at the fifth position (8%). As regards the rest of the categories, talking with friends contributed 21% in 1985, and

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increased slightly by 5% in 1995.

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, there was an interesting point that playing computer games became

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for mature people at just

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a quarter in the end period even though it was nothing in the beginning.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

162 words

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The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school to study further at University or go straight into the workplace? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your knowledge and experience.

Some people think that success in life comes from hardwork and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.