The table below shows the production of potatoes, cabbage and onions in five countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph gives information on the agricultural produce in five countries in 2012. It is clearly seen that
China
have an enormous production of potatoes reaching 9214
Mt
, which are highest, as compared with other countries. In detail,
China
and Russia recorded the peak rate of Cabbage produced with 3187
Mt
and 2765
Mt
in contrast
to Spain and Ireland
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out only have 200
Mt
and 20
Mt
.
Moreover
, the amount of Cabbage in Brazil is zero. In the other category, Onions are the least common of farming produce in Ireland and Spain among the given, which registered only 4
Mt
and 0
Mt
.
However
,
China
, Russia, and Brazil have a higher amount of Onions harvested with 2602
Mt
, 2039
Mt
, and 1417
Mt
.
Lastly
, the harvest of Potatoes is lower in Ireland, Spain, Russia and Brazil with recorded only 72
Mt
, 2
Mt
, 30
Mt
and 3
Mt
as compared with
China
.
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