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The table below shows the production of potatoes, cabbage and onions in five countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph gives information on the agricultural produce in five countries in 2012. It is clearly seen that
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 have an enormous production of potatoes reaching 9214
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, which are highest, as compared with other countries. In detail,
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 and Russia recorded the peak rate of Cabbage produced with 3187
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 and 2765
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in contrast
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 to Spain and Ireland
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out only have 200
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 and 20
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.
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, the amount of Cabbage in Brazil is zero. In the other category, Onions are the least common of farming produce in Ireland and Spain among the given, which registered only 4
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 and 0
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,
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, Russia, and Brazil have a higher amount of Onions harvested with 2602
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, 2039
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, and 1417
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, the harvest of Potatoes is lower in Ireland, Spain, Russia and Brazil with recorded only 72
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, 2
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, 30
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 and 3
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 as compared with
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, mt with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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