The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The picture illustrates the layouts of the Islip town
centre
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now and future planning. It is obvious that the town
centre
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will witness significant change in the future, in which more facilities will be added at the cost of the disappearance of the countryside and many infrastructures will be upgraded
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meeting new demands. At present, two rows of shops are separated by the main road stretching from west to east, where they border the countryside to the north and the housing to the south, respectively. In future, the main road will be transformed into a pedestrian street with the road widened.
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, shops in the north will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping
centre
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, a car
park
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and a new housing
area
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,
although
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the south one will remain unchanged.
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, a designed dual carriageway will surround the town
centre
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,
thus
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occupying the
area
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of the countryside and connecting all facilities in the
centre
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.
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the school will stay where it is now, the original housing
area
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will be cut into two parts as a new housing
area
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nearby the
park
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will take up a proportion of the land of the
park
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.
As a result
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, the size of the
park
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will be reduced approximately in half.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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