The graph illustrates the average prices of three metals
A glance at the line graph illustrates the monthly value shift of copper,
nickel
, and zinc
throughout 2014 in percentage.
Overall
, it is apparent that all figures witnessed a downward trajectory in general with differences in pattern. There was a noticeable fluctuation and dramatic drop in the price of Nickel
and Zinc
, whilst the figure for Copper was relatively stable and hovered around the same level as its beginning.
To begin
with, Nickel
and Zinc
commenced at 6% and 1% respectively. While
the proportion of Zinc
experienced an increase to 3% in February, the value of Nickel
saw a relentless and drastic decline until June and sank to the bottom at -3%. Both Nickel
and Zinc
subsequently
rose before levelling off at around -1% and 1% respectively. Furthermore
, both prices increased and ended with Zick rising slightly to 2%, whilst Nickel
plateaued at 1%.
On the other hand
, the price of Copper began at 2% and faced a continuous stable decline to -0,5% in June. Later, the figure rose to 1% and hovered around that level up to September and finally
dropped very slightly before going back to 2% just like the initial price.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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