The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007

The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007
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The line graph illustrates the mean
carbon
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dioxide emissions per individual in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Portugal and Italy from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, Italy and Portugal reported a gradual increase in their
carbon
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footprint throughout the given period,
while
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, the United Kingdom saw a steady decrease in greenhouse gas emissions. Despite some initial fluctuations
Sweden
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later saw a drop in its
carbon
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footprint. The average
carbon
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emitted in
Sweden
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saw a steep rise from a little over 4 metric
tonnes
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in 1967 to slightly above 6 metric
tonne
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tonnes
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in 1977.
Thereafter
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, the incline was much more steady till 1997
were
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where
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it was just below 8 metric
tonnes
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where it plateaued at
this
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level until 2007. Meanwhile, Portugal displayed a
uniformed
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soar from under 2 metric
tonnes
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in 1967 to less than 4 metric
tonnes
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in 1987. Portugal
then
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showed a larger incline to slightly under 6 metric
tonnes
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in 1997, where it remained till 2007. The United Kingdom saw minimal change throughout the decade,
however
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, documented a continuous decline in
carbon
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emissions from over 10 metric
tonnes
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in 1967 to just above 8 metric
tonnes
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in 2007.
However
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,
Sweden
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depicted some fluctuation. It
raised
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rose
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sharply in 1967 from above 8 metric
tonnes
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to over 10 metric
tonnes
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as of 197u. Hereafter, there was a sudden drop in its greenhouse gas footprint to less than 8 metric
tonnes
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in 1987.
This
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decrease became more stable until 20l7
where
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when
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it was reported at just under 6 metric
tonnes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • per capita
  • environmental impact
  • trend analysis
  • industrialization
  • energy consumption
  • greenhouse gases
  • sustainable development
  • emission reduction
  • technological innovation
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • economic growth
  • climate change
  • environmental policy
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