Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the current area,
due to
the rise of globalization has made people buy the same Linking Words
products
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worldwidely
. Correct your spelling
worldwide
Furthermore
, there seems to be negative progress in current world Linking Words
development
rather than positive progress. Use synonyms
This
essay will elaborate more Linking Words
why
the same Change preposition
on why
product
can be impacted negatively to our world Use synonyms
development
.
On the one hand, there were several negative impacts Use synonyms
to
our world since the Change preposition
on
products
that we used were the same. One negative is that the Use synonyms
countries
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were
not Verb problem
did
belonging
uniquely, they were no longer promoting their Wrong verb form
belong
uniqueness
Replace the word
unique
product
to others. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Indonesia, rather than buy their local Linking Words
products
, several people try to import Korea’s Use synonyms
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product
, because they want to have the same Fix the agreement mistake
products
product
as their idol. Use synonyms
As a result
, it Linking Words
gives
an economic impact Verb problem
has
to
the local players and we cannot explore our unique Change preposition
on
products
.
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On the other hand
, buying similar Linking Words
products
has some positive Use synonyms
development
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the Linking Words
product
might become a universal Use synonyms
product
and it can be used by everyone. Use synonyms
This
is because the Linking Words
product
tries to make a single Use synonyms
product
that all Use synonyms
countries
agree to use. Use synonyms
For example
, phones, Linking Words
laptops
, there are electronic Correct word choice
and laptops
products
that give us the same treatment, Use synonyms
such
as the keyboard, system, utility, etc.
In conclusion, despite some positive Linking Words
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development
as a universal Fix the agreement mistake
developments
product
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and
can be used by everyone. The negative Correct word choice
that
development
of Use synonyms
countries
in becoming more similar outweighs the positive Use synonyms
development
. The negative impacts are the Use synonyms
countries
not belonging to a unique country, and there is an economic impact Use synonyms
to
local players.Change preposition
on
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