Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the current area,
due to
the rise of globalization has made people buy the same products
worldwidely
. Correct your spelling
worldwide
Furthermore
, there seems to be negative progress in current world development
rather than positive progress. This
essay will elaborate more why
the same Change preposition
on why
product
can be impacted negatively to our world development
.
On the one hand, there were several negative impacts to
our world since the Change preposition
on
products
that we used were the same. One negative is that the countries
were
not Verb problem
did
belonging
uniquely, they were no longer promoting their Wrong verb form
belong
uniqueness
Replace the word
unique
product
to others. For instance
, in Indonesia, rather than buy their local products
, several people try to import Korea’s product
, because they want to have the same Fix the agreement mistake
products
product
as their idol. As a result
, it gives
an economic impact Verb problem
has
to
the local players and we cannot explore our unique Change preposition
on
products
.
On the other hand
, buying similar products
has some positive development
. Firstly
, the product
might become a universal product
and it can be used by everyone. This
is because the product
tries to make a single product
that all countries
agree to use. For example
, phones, laptops
, there are electronic Correct word choice
and laptops
products
that give us the same treatment, such
as the keyboard, system, utility, etc.
In conclusion, despite some positive development
as a universal Fix the agreement mistake
developments
product
and
can be used by everyone. The negative Correct word choice
that
development
of countries
in becoming more similar outweighs the positive development
. The negative impacts are the countries
not belonging to a unique country, and there is an economic impact to
local players.Change preposition
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