The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
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The maps illustrate the modification of street entrances to metropolis hospitals at two different times (2007 and 2010).
Overall
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, as can be seen, the reachable avenue to the clinic town was simply approachable which the fewer of the futures.
In contrast
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, the modification of the track in 2010 added more facilities with some changes. The ring pathway has remained the same. In 2007, from the roadway in the south to the asylum, the citizens passed through the surgery highway which was marked with the bus shelter surrounding the route.
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, to the right of Medical Centre Street, there was parkland for the car which was available to the crew and the folks.
In addition
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, there was a ring path encircling the public health centre. In 2010, there were various modernised in the artery. One noticeable feature was that the urban sickroom and the subway had constructed two roundabouts which connected to the other facility. The bus stop has developed into a station which links to both traffic circles.
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, the carpark has been distinguished into different areas. A garage for the public is located in the east of the medical clinic
although
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the employee's parking area has not changed since 2007.
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