In many countries, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening. What problems does this situation cause, and what solutions can you suggest?
In these modern days,
economic
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economics
play
a vital role in all countries and individuals, everyone must have money to buy things. Recently, some Correct subject-verb agreement
plays
people
claims
that the gap between the rich and poor is widening in many areas of the world. From my point of view, it Change the verb form
claim
has been
a serious issue that cannot be ignored by Wrong verb form
is
government
and Correct article usage
the government
public
.
First of all, education could be a factor that Correct article usage
the public
cause
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causes
this
problem, children who born
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are born
in
Change preposition
into
a
wealthy Correct article usage
apply
family
can receive systematic learning at school, but poverty Fix the agreement mistake
families
couldn't
, Wrong verb form
can't
they
don't have Correct word choice
as they
ability
to send their kids to school. Change the article
the ability
Therefore
, those poor kids did not have chance
to gain knowledge and lost the stepping stone to get into work to earn money. In some certain cases, Correct article usage
a chance
people
with disable
cannot study well, Replace the word
disabilities
this
might be a reason they fail in future. Besides
, in some countries, government
did not give more attention to these struggling Add an article
the government
people
, they more focus on court
rich Wrong verb form
courting
people
. Thence
, the poverty group do not have Correct your spelling
Therefore
opportunity
to turn over their fate.
Correct article usage
the opportunity
However
, there have
some Verb problem
are
approach
to decrease the gap between rich and poor. It is never too late to mend, Fix the agreement mistake
approaches
government
need to take immediate action to tackle this
problem, especially provide
free Wrong verb form
by providing
educational
to them. Some universities and Replace the word
education
institution
Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
also
provide scholarship
to students who perform Fix the agreement mistake
scholarships
excellent
in Change the adjective
excellently
examination
. Fix the agreement mistake
examinations
Hence
, those poor kids have opportunity
to Correct article usage
the opportunity
success
in future and even repay Replace the word
succeed
to
their home country. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, charity programs can be conducted to help poverty group
to let them have a better life. In some countries, there Fix the agreement mistake
groups
have
a mandate rule regarding Verb problem
is
minimum
salary of Add an article
the minimum
worker
, it is an approach to Fix the agreement mistake
workers
assure
Verb problem
ensure
staff's
benefits. Change noun form
staff
Tax
imposes should Add an article
The tax
be reduce
Change the verb form
be reduced
to
those poor Change preposition
on
people
so that they have
can have a better financial condition to focus on their health and education.
Taking everything into a nutshell, shrinking the gap between wealthier and poorer is necessary for a country. Everyone should take serious on Unnecessary verb
apply
this
topic, especially
Rephrase
seriously, especially
government
. Correct article usage
the government
Consequently
, income inequality can be adapted in the future.Submitted by sientan04 on
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