The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual 'income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual 'income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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provide
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information about how many
of
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households
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by their
income
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annually (between
lees
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less
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than $25,000 - $100,000 or more) in the US in three different periods in 1007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, In 2007 and 2015, the number of people
had
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who had
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their
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an
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annual
income
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$
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of $
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100,000 or more was the
most
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highest
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,
while
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that $75,000 - $99,999 saw the reverse. To commence with, many
of
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US
households
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were having annual
income
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$
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of $
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100,000 or more
was
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were
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the majority and served nearly 30
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millions
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million
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people, by the year of 2011,
it
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then
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they
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experienced a slight increase to around 27
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millions
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before rising to 34
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millions
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million
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in 2015. Interestingly, a
simillar
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similar
trend was placed in the number of people by $75,00-$99,999
income
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annualy
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annually
, it stood at 14
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millions
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million
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,
then
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fell slightly
to
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in 2011 before going up to exactly 15
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millions
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million
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the
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at the
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end of the period. It
was became
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the least among other categories. In terms of
three
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the three
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remaining categories, both
of
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households
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with less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 saw an increase after four years,
while
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the former stood at 25
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millions
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million
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then
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increased to 28
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millions
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million
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, the latter starting at 27
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millions
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million
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and went up to 30 million. These categories
then
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saw a small drop
by
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of
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2
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millions
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million
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of
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each.
However
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, only the number of
households
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with $50,000 - $74,999
income
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annually remained the same.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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