The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart demonstrates how many
hours
each day were spent doing relaxation activities on a holiday in Greece
in August 2019 by Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian travellers.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the given graph that Chinese tourists preferred to read books on a vacation in Greece
, while
visitors from Brazil spent most time
at the beach.
With regards to travellers from China and Brazilia had significantly different preferences in how they used their time
on a celebration in 2019. Sightseers from both countries spent their time
visiting places for an hour and two hours
a day respectively throughout the period in Greece
.
8 hours
were spent reading books by Chinese visitors, while
it took only half by Brazilian tourists. However
, travellers from Brazil chose to be at the beach for a quarter time
of the day, at the same time
, visitors from China were only 3 hours
.
Turning to American and Turkish tourists, the time
spent on a sightseeing trip in Greece
was identical to 3 hours
a
twenty-four-hour period. Change preposition
in a
However
, whereas
the former suggested being at the beach for 4 hours
and 5 hours
reading a book, the latter chose to spend their time
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