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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart demonstrates how many
hours
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 each day were spent doing relaxation activities on a holiday in
Greece
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 in August 2019 by Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian travellers.
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, it can be clearly seen from the given graph that Chinese tourists preferred to read books on a vacation in
Greece
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,
while
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 visitors from Brazil spent most
time
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 at the beach. With regards to travellers from China and Brazilia had significantly different preferences in how they used their
time
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 on a celebration in 2019. Sightseers from both countries spent their
time
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 visiting places for an hour and two
hours
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 a day respectively throughout the period in
Greece
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. 8
hours
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 were spent reading books by Chinese visitors,
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 it took only half by Brazilian tourists.
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, travellers from Brazil chose to be at the beach for a quarter
time
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 of the day, at the same
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, visitors from China were only 3
hours
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. Turning to American and Turkish tourists, the
time
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 spent on a sightseeing trip in
Greece
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 was identical to 3
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a
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twenty-four-hour period.
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,
whereas
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 the former suggested being at the beach for 4
hours
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 and 5
hours
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 reading a book, the latter chose to spend their
time
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 opposite of it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, greece, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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