The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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The most essential thing about
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is it should be a way to improve everyone's lives. I firmly agree with
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opinion because first of all,
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is the fundamental thinking for the
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any subject and
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it can be as
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for upcoming untold stories that
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in the world.
Science
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has a wide of
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and perspectives.
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as
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fundamental thinking is important for
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in order to investigate
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the problem or issues, including how to
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hypothesis,
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a suitable methodology and
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producing the result and the conclusion of the
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following steps, not just in subjects related
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of subjects.
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, even if the
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of sociology want to address an issue
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not related to
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following steps so that it can
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scientifically
. Another reason is
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gives
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about everything that happens in
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world.
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, it can be
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references
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for people to investigate and give
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about something
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still unknown.
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, the invention of gravity by Newton led other
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to provide other theories
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as fluid, speed, and acceleration. In conclusion,
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is designed to improve people's lives because it has been
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a fundamental thinking of
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for the next
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • technological advancements
  • medical discoveries
  • life-changing inventions
  • innovations
  • solutions to human problems
  • enhancing quality of life
  • improvement of healthcare
  • transportation
  • communication
  • agriculture
  • energy sectors
  • eradication of diseases
  • prolongation of life expectancy
  • global challenges
  • climate change
  • overpopulation
  • food security
  • developed world
  • underprivileged communities
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