For school children, teacher have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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school

is very important for many

children

on social and

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intelligence

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of

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their

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.

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people argue that parent is the part that

impact

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impacts

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to

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the learning of

children

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viewpoint,

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strongly believe these various options,

although

numerous, actually offer us important chances to grow personally and professionally. In

term

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of education in the

school

, the

teacher

have

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a lot of teaching

skills

and knowledge.

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example

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how to communicate with

child

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a child

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or how to

rise

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raise

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a

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intellectual

of

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child.

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in

the

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school

children

have

paticapate

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participated

participate

with other people and that can improve social

skills

.

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example

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if they meet

unknown

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the unknown

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person

at

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first

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time they can communicate and make

friend

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friends

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with them.

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addition

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addition,

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teacher

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teachers

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have specific knowledge from each subject.The main

reasons

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reason

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why

school

teacher

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teachers

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impact

to

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children

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children's

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skills

because

of

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they spend 8-10 hours each day at

school

.

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,

in

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the

examine

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encourage

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encourages

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skills

of

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children

for time management,discipline,

effort

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and effort

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In addition

,some schools design special

class

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classes

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for students to improve

another

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another skill

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skills

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the subject

that

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applied

for

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science

student

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students

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called STEM.

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STEM

was

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subject

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that

use

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technology

integrate

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with science or mathematics

for

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make

the

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innovations.

Also

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the stress after studying at

school

is less than

study

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the study

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by

parent

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a parent

the parent

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.

Inconclusion

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, I strongly believe that

shcool

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school

and

teacher

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teaching

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is

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are

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important to

children

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children's

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intellectual and social

communicate

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communication

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,

along

with

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emotion

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emotional

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stress after learning must

can

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reduce

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.