Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

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There is a widespread global perception
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learning international
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has become popular among students.
People
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that the best way
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english
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in an
English
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country
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essay aims to delve into provide two
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dimension
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of learning
english
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in specific countries. In many
university
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,
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is a requirement for pupils before starting to
study
abroad. Those initiatives in associated with easier communication with each student from the other countries. In terms of ability in
English
,
people
believe that speaking
English
is a skill and knowledge that should embedded in daily life. Learning directly in
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english-speaker
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country
will
more
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beneficial for
people
. It
make
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more easier for us to acquire
of
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more
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word
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.
Subsequently
, it will
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people
to
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communicate in
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more
confident
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regardless
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of formal
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english
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literature.
However
, learning formal
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needs
further
study
that is
difficult to obtain outside
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field. There
is
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a specific frameworks to be able
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formal
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like grammar.
On the other hand
, in
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era of technology, many online
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to
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make
people
easier to
study
language
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the language
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. Not only
study
English
but
also
other language
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from other
coutry
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countries
. By utilising that students are more rapidly studying
English
from home-based
country
.
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online could save time,
money
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, and explore in depth
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it
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Furthermore
, there are many option tutors from the entire world who
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capability
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to teach us
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english
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both formal and informal. In conclusion, learning
English
is
a
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mandatory for
student
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before
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abroad. It
become
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easier to
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with other students. Studying in
English
in
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an English-speaker
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English-speaker
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country
is
a
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valuable for those
people
by embedding
in
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their daily
life
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.
Nevertheless
, those initiatives would
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a lot
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money
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and time if
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we
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compared to
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studying
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study
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studying
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online from home-based
country
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