Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.
People
have different views about whether to live in a country with cold or hot weather
. I love both climates
as each of them offers some special features which This
essay will argue them.
On the one hand, some people
tend to live in hot climates
due to
several reasons. Firstly
, the diversity of foods, vegetables, and fruits is high because these areas have good weather
conditions for agriculture so food products are more affordable than in countries
with cold climates
. Secondly
, People
can spend a lot of time out of house
make more friends, and do more physical activities. Physical activity can improve individuals' mental health and increase happiness and productivity so these individuals are more gregarious, accommodating, and approachable. Add an article
the house
Finally
, Numerous festivals and events are held in these regions which can bring people
together and create a feeling of community and unity. For example
, in India, many different festivals are organized annually such
as Diwali and Mahashivratri which give people
the opportunity to spend more time with their families and friends.
On the other hand
, citizens in countries
with cold climates
can benefit from several things. One of the main advantages of living in northern areas is that due to
the cold weather
people
have to stay at home and they don't have a wide variety of recreation so they have more time to spend on study and work. Thus
, they built a decent economy and their industries are constantly progressing which makes these countries
favorable and successful. In these countries
, we have a high chance of finding a secure job with a reasonable salary. Another advantage is that the rate of prescription is extremely high and people
can enjoy different outdoor funs in snowy weather
such
as snow fighting, skiing, and ice skating.
In conclusion, In my point of view, both cold and hot climates
have upsides and it depends on individuals' preferences, interests, and experiences to choose one of them for living.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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logical structure
The essay lacks clear structure. It is important to make distinct paragraphs for each view and ensure the flow of ideas is logical and systematic.
introduction conclusion present
While an introduction and conclusion are present, they need to be more developed. The introduction should clearly state the topic and the writer's intention to discuss both views. The conclusion should summarize the main points and restate the writer's preference clearly.
supported main points
Main points are supported with examples, but these can be further developed for clarity and to strengthen the arguments. Examples should be specific and directly related to the points being made.
complete response
The response does not fully address all parts of the task. The personal preference is not conveyed convincingly and is too vague. The essay should include a clear, well-supported explanation of the writer's own preference.
clear comprehensive ideas
Ideas are stated, but they need to be clearer and more comprehensive. Ideas should be expanded upon, and information should be organized in a way that it builds a strong argument or narrative.
relevant specific examples
Examples used are relevant but could be more specific. The inclusion of particular instances or personal experiences can help to strengthen the argument and make the essay more engaging.
Your opinion
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