The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The provided bar graph shows the price
number
of Scotland's
exports
to the
UK
and to other countries outside the
UK
in 2014 for 9 industries stated in the graph. The
number
varies between 0,6
billion
pounds
and 13,8
billion
pounds
. In the agriculture, forestry, fishing, and mining industries, the
number
of the
world
's
exports
was four times higher than for the
UK
,
that is
2,4
billion
pounds
for the
world
's
exports
and 0,6
billion
pounds
for the
UK
. The same trend happened for the other three sectors,
that is
the food and drink manufacturers, metal, mechanical, and transport equipment manufacturers, and the chemical and mineral products industries. Meanwhile, the
number
for electrical and instrument engineering
exports
to the
UK
was slightly higher in the same year when it was at 4
billion
pounds
to the
UK
and 2,3
billion
pounds
for the
world
's
exports
. The rest of the categories showed massive differences in the
exports
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export
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numbers between the
UK
and the rest of the
world
, where the amounts vary between 3 and 13,8
billion
pounds
for the worldwide
exports
,
while
the
exports
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export
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numbers to the
UK
only plunged between 0,9 and 1.7
billion
pounds
.
In addition
, it can be seen that business, finance, and restaurant services gave the biggest
number
of Scotland's
exports
to the whole
world
,
that is
13.8
billion
pounds
, and the largest amount of
exports
to the
UK
is from chemical and mineral products. It can be concluded that the
number
varies between each category where most of them had the same trend where the
number
of
exports
to the rest of the
world
was higher than
exports
to the
UK
.
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