The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
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The provided bar graph shows the price
number
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of Scotland's
exports
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to the
UK
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and to other countries outside the
UK
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in 2014 for 9 industries stated in the graph. The
number
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varies between 0,6
billion
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pounds
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and 13,8
billion
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pounds
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. In the agriculture, forestry, fishing, and mining industries, the
number
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of the
world
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's
exports
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was four times higher than for the
UK
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,
that is
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2,4
billion
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pounds
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for the
world
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's
exports
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and 0,6
billion
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pounds
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for the
UK
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. The same trend happened for the other three sectors,
that is
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the food and drink manufacturers, metal, mechanical, and transport equipment manufacturers, and the chemical and mineral products industries. Meanwhile, the
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for electrical and instrument engineering
exports
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to the
UK
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was slightly higher in the same year when it was at 4
billion
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pounds
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to the
UK
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and 2,3
billion
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pounds
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for the
world
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's
exports
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. The rest of the categories showed massive differences in the
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exports
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export
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numbers between the
UK
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and the rest of the
world
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, where the amounts vary between 3 and 13,8
billion
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pounds
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for the worldwide
exports
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,
while
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the
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exports
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export
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numbers to the
UK
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only plunged between 0,9 and 1.7
billion
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pounds
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.
In addition
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, it can be seen that business, finance, and restaurant services gave the biggest
number
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of Scotland's
exports
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to the whole
world
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,
that is
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13.8
billion
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pounds
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, and the largest amount of
exports
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to the
UK
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is from chemical and mineral products. It can be concluded that the
number
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varies between each category where most of them had the same trend where the
number
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of
exports
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to the rest of the
world
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was higher than
exports
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to the
UK
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, exports, uk, billion, pounds, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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