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The flowchart below shows the process involved in completing the work experience requirement for university students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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This
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students
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 finish their work experience requirements.
Overall
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, there are apparently three main parts, starting with preparing for permission, followed by arranging tasks for the whole session, and
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 the final is producing and evaluating reports. First of all,
students
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 should choose and arrange interviews for the potential workplaces
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in where
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where
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which
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 they are interested
in
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apply
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. After receiving the acceptance letter,
students
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 submit for
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the professor’s
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 permission. Following on, they make their work plan for a minimum of 10 hours /week over 20 weeks. Next in the process, it can be observed that report forms need to be completed and submitted to the professor every week.
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,
students
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 engage in meetings until
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 workweek
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 with their supervisor who gives the evaluation form. Moving forward to the final stages, the final report should be submitted before the week of
spring
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 term.
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When writing an overview, ensure you summarize the main stages of the process without listing them in detail. Avoid phrases like 'apparently three main parts' which do not add value to the summary.
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Work on creating more precise and informative overviews. While you identified the stages, offering insights into what makes each part significant could enhance the response.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay includes all major elements of the flowchart but lacks a clear introduction and conclusion. Introduce the topic properly and consider adding a concluding statement for completeness.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central theme and that the information within them flows logically from one point to the next.
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The use of relevant examples or data from the flowchart to illustrate the steps in the process could be improved. Where possible, include these to substantiate the stages described.
coherence and cohesion
The main points should be more effectively supported by a detailed description of the process, avoiding overly simple statements that do not convey the full complexity of the process.

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