the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The diagram given illustrates the layout of the central library 20 years ago compared to how it is today. It is already apparent that several alterations were made as there are wider kinds of services available in the present version of the library.
However
, although
the rooms have been reorganized, the entrance is in the same place as it was. The tables and chairs that were located in the middle of the library had been removed, left with the empty hallway. The CDs, videos, and computer game room
on the upper left side was renovated as the room
is visibly bigger and was also
reorganized for storytelling occasions and the children’s books
section, complete with 2 sofas as an extra facility. Across that, the reading room
has changed to be the computer room
and the old adult fiction books
hallway in between has shifted into all reference books
. In the upper right corner, the children's books
room
has been modified into a lecture room
. In front of that room
, what used to be an adult non-fiction section has now been upgraded to be a multi-use space, which includes an adult fiction books
area, an information desk, and several vending machines for visitors to enjoy. Lastly
, There was an enquiry desk right below the hallway before it was altered to be a cafeSubmitted by pink panther on
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