The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.

The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.
The presented graph illustrates the sources of
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and its concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that there are four
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sources,
such
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as Coastal Vegetation, Domestic and Market Gardens, Industrial, and Waste Disposal. Based on the concentration level, the top three origins are Industrial, Waste disposal and Domestic and Market Gardens. Focusing on Coastal Vegetation, it is evident that the substance is absorbed into the soil by two origins, including oxidation by lightning and fixation by vegetation.
On the other hand
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, fertiliser and household liquid wastes are the major contributors of
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in the Domestic and Market Garden areas.
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those areas have more than one domain of
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substance, Industrial and Waste disposal areas each have only one major source of
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. First is the leaks from storage tanks and wastewater ponds for the industry. The next is through Landfill leakage for the disposal sector. After
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infiltrates the soil from those origins, it flows to the groundwater discharge zone through the saltwater interface before ending up in the ocean.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nitrogen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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