The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.

The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and

concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.
The presented graph illustrates the sources of
Nitrogen
and its concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there are four
Nitrogen
sources,
such
as Coastal Vegetation, Domestic and Market Gardens, Industrial, and Waste Disposal. Based on the concentration level, the top three origins are Industrial, Waste disposal and Domestic and Market Gardens. Focusing on Coastal Vegetation, it is evident that the substance is absorbed into the soil by two origins, including oxidation by lightning and fixation by vegetation.
On the other hand
, fertiliser and household liquid wastes are the major contributors of
Nitrogen
in the Domestic and Market Garden areas.
While
those areas have more than one domain of
such
substance, Industrial and Waste disposal areas each have only one major source of
Nitrogen
. First is the leaks from storage tanks and wastewater ponds for the industry. The next is through Landfill leakage for the disposal sector. After
Nitrogen
infiltrates the soil from those origins, it flows to the groundwater discharge zone through the saltwater interface before ending up in the ocean.
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