the graph show the map of islip center. describe it

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map above shows the comparison between the existing Islip town centre map and the newly planned development.The common elements of the two maps are shops, a park, several housing, and a school. Some of the changes that will be

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are the new housing places, the pedestrian-only road, the bus station, and the car park. Two of the new housing places will be constructed inside the town centre,

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the other housing will be built on the other way of the dual carriageway road. The most significant change that will be constructed is the dual carriageway that goes around the town centre. In the coming years, the only place that will stay the same is the school. It will be having the same size and the position will

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remain unchanged.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

133 words

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