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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts illustrate the exports of world pineapple by the top major three pineapple-producing states in 2 different years, 2009 and 2019, and a cost detail to the buyer of each pineapple in 2019. Units are measured in metric
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 for the first chart.
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, it can clearly be seen that there were major position
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 between 2009 and 2019. In 2009,
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 B was the leading state,
while
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 in 2019, it was overtaken by state A.
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,
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 C remained the lowest. In terms of the highest pineapple-producing nation at the start,
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 B started at approximately 4.5 metric
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 in 2009. It
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 experienced a significant decline to below 2 metric
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 in 2019. Meanwhile,
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 A began at roughly 1.5 metric
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 before soaring significantly to just above 10 metric
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 in 2019 and overtaking
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 B.
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,
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 C started at less than 0.5 metric
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 and remained stable until 2019. Regarding the breakdown of the cost in 2019, distribution and retail constituted 35%, which made it the highest cost to the consumer,
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followed by profit and taxes, which accounted for 18% and 16%, respectively.
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, international transport stood at 12%. The
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 are producer, export costs, and import license, which if combined constituted less than 20%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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