Some people think that detailed crime reports on newspapers and TV can have many disadvantages. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
Nowadays,
crime
reports
are one of the most delectable sources of entertaiment
. Gruesome details of many prosecuted cases are shown freely on popular newspapers, and open television channels without any prior warning. Correct your spelling
entertainment
Moreover
, due to
technology moving very ahead of time, even children as small as a 12 year old
could Add a hyphen
12-year-old
has
access to these portfolios. Change the verb form
have
However
, not all of this
leads to a bad ending for an individual, therefore
ahead i
will be discussing my views on Change the capitalization
I
this
.
Real- life
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Real-life
crime
reports
are basically swallowed down by many people around the world. It could a
Add a missing verb
be a
12 year old
or even a Add a hyphen
12-year-old
55 year old
, there Add a hyphen
55-year-old
is
no age restrictions for newspapers Change the verb form
are
on
which these are being published. Reading harsh details about criminal lives, and information about the case could Change preposition
in
effect
a person mentally. Correct your spelling
affect
Furthermore
, reading or watching them on the
television could lead to Correct article usage
apply
mental-health
problems like depression or anxiety. People who might have been through similar experiences to the Correct your spelling
mental health
once
that they Correct your spelling
ones
witness
or read, could have a comeback on past trauma. So, in many cases, Wrong verb form
witnessed
this
could cause suicide rates to go much higher indirectly.
On the other hand
, even though, the disadvantages have a much higher effect on a human-being
, there Correct your spelling
beings
is
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are
also
ways a person might have succeeded taking
a glimpse of these absolutely Change preposition
in taking
heinious
Correct your spelling
heinous
reports
. Firstly
, it might have enraged a huge fire of passion into the subject of criminology in a person while
viewing various different aspects of criminal activities. So, diving deeper into that, a child or an
young adult might consider building a career to study Change the article
a
behaviour
of a Add an article
the behaviour
crime
performer to reduce rates of murders in their country.
Overall
, having a look over possible opinions about crime
reports
, I am in strong agreement that reading these or viewing them on TV must have an age limit but coming to a conclusion that they don't have a good impact at all is wrong.Submitted by routmanmayee on
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