An increasing number of larger shopping malls, areas and departmental stores are leading to the decline number of smaller corner shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages

The development of shopping centres, areas and departmental shops make small

stores

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existence. In

this

essay,

i

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will examine and analyze the advantages and disadvantages of

this

topic,

while

i

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strongly believe that the benefits

outweight

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outweigh

the drawbacks.

To begin

with, the interest

of

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apply

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shopping in

the

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a

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large number of

people

has increased from

time

to

time

making shopping buildings extend

at

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to

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different areas from

time

to

time

.

However

,

this

issue must have

few

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a few

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advantages for customers

such

as easiness

to find

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of finding

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needs in one place,

convinient

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convenience

in

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of

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parking and more

important

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importantly

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buildings can be built on unused land.

For example

, Pakuwon Mall in

Surbaya

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Surabaya

, one of the biggest malls in Indonesia, have

a

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plenty of clothes

stores

, food courts, and supermarkets,

hence

people

usually visit

this

one building for many purposes without worrying about searching the

stores

or the location.

Also

, the land outside the malls is made for residences and apartments making

more

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it more

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useful and presentable.

On the other hand

, there are two drawbacks that will be given for considering about the augment of the department

stores

which are the distance from houses and the crowd in every

outlets

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.

Moreover

, the

prize

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price

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of rent in the building is more expensive than in the small house which the majority of businessmen have small capital for constructing their business.

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, in Indonesia, many new cafes and restaurants are opened on the side of the road as they have to manage their funds and

also

it is easier for

people

especially teenagers and students to approach and find

that

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places. In conclusion,

this

topic has its own profits and downsides with reasoned explanation. Personally,

i

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think the advantages surpass the disadvantages because it makes

people

easier to find their necessities and more comfortable

to find

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finding

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parking

lot

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while

the drawbacks are just the location and the situation.