The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of struggles people often face when living in another country based on three different
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groups.
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, the challenges include making
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, finding somewhere to live, and learning the local
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. Looking at the data from the
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group of 18 until 34, most of them
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having to make
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with a proportion up to 46%. It is
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followed by finding somewhere to live closely behind with 40% and learning the local
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at 29%.
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, the people in the
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group 35-54 struggle the most with finding somewhere to live evidenced by 39%. Regardless, the proportion of learning the local
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and making
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does not differ much. It is closely similar with just a 1 percent difference at 36% and 35%. Moving towards the
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group of over 55, the highest percentage goes to learning the local
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with up to 54%. The percentage is quietly followed by making
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and finding somewhere to live at 23% and 22%.
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, each
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groups have different preferences of struggles with no similarity.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • challenges
  • language barriers
  • communicate
  • work
  • culture shock
  • customs
  • traditions
  • social norms
  • housing
  • demand
  • prices
  • friends
  • social network
  • expatriates
  • financial issues
  • relocating
  • economy
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