The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of struggles people often face when living in another country based on three different
age
groups. Moreover
, the challenges include making friends
, finding somewhere to live, and learning the local language
.
Looking at the data from the age
group of 18 until 34, most of them disturbed
Add a missing verb
were disturbed
with
having to make Change preposition
by
friends
with a proportion up to 46%. It is also
followed by finding somewhere to live closely behind with 40% and learning the local language
at 29%. On the other hand
, the people in the age
group 35-54 struggle the most with finding somewhere to live evidenced by 39%. Regardless, the proportion of learning the local language
and making friends
does not differ much. It is closely similar with just a 1 percent difference at 36% and 35%. Moving towards the age
group of over 55, the highest percentage goes to learning the local language
with up to 54%. The percentage is quietly followed by making friends
and finding somewhere to live at 23% and 22%.
Overall
, each age
groups have different preferences of struggles with no similarity.Submitted by alyarachmadivaa on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, friends, language with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼