The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of struggles people often face when living in another country based on three different
age
groups.
Moreover
, the challenges include making
friends
, finding somewhere to live, and learning the local
language
. Looking at the data from the
age
group of 18 until 34, most of them
disturbed
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having to make
friends
with a proportion up to 46%. It is
also
followed by finding somewhere to live closely behind with 40% and learning the local
language
at 29%.
On the other hand
, the people in the
age
group 35-54 struggle the most with finding somewhere to live evidenced by 39%. Regardless, the proportion of learning the local
language
and making
friends
does not differ much. It is closely similar with just a 1 percent difference at 36% and 35%. Moving towards the
age
group of over 55, the highest percentage goes to learning the local
language
with up to 54%. The percentage is quietly followed by making
friends
and finding somewhere to live at 23% and 22%.
Overall
, each
age
groups have different preferences of struggles with no similarity.
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