The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given line graph compares the
number
of visits to two music
websites that were Music
Choice
and Pop
Parade between Day
1 and 15. Overall
, Music
Choice
was the predominant website during the surveyed period, except for Day
12 and 13.
If we examine the graph deeply, Fix the agreement mistake
Days
although
the number
of Pop
Parade viewers dropped dramatically from approximately 120,000 on Day
3 to shy of 40,000 on Day
9, it finally
recovered in the next 2 days and reached its second highest of 150,000 people on Day
11. On the other hand
, the number
of Music
Choice
visitors remained below 40,000 between Day
4 and 11. After that, it witnessed a surge to nearly 120,000 individuals on Day
12.
From Day
1 to 11, even though the number
of Music
Choice
viewers was fewer than Pop
Decade, the latter overtook the former to become the more popular one. Lastly
, on day
15, Pop
Decade visitors reached a peak of 170,000, whereas
there was a significant fall in the number
of Music
Choice
viewers, accounting for roughly half of the Pop
Decade.Submitted by kylewkh726 on
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