The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph chart displays data related to difficulties that immigrants face based on their age.
Overall
, it is evident from the chart that making
friends
is becoming less challenging as people age;
however
, the number of people who suffer from the remaining categories decreases
while
they grow up. Turning to the youngest age group, whose significant trouble is making
friends
, with almost half of the total,
this
is followed by the accommodation problem which is represented in two-fifths, which is similar to the percentage of people who suffer from finding houses to live between 35-54 years old (39%). The remaining categories, which are learning the local language, and making
friends
, account for similar percentages 35%, and 36%, respectively. Looking more closely at the senior citizens, more than half of
this
category give 'learning the local language' as a major problem, the second challenging issue, which represents
in
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23%, is making
friends
.
This
is joined by
the
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finding a place to live, with 22%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words friends with synonyms.
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