▪️The chart below gives information about doctors practicing in Australia over a 30-year period, including their gender and country of origin. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the data about the proportion of Australian and international
doctors
, who were practiced in Australia
based on their sex and during 30 years. Overall
, the population of doctors
who were born in Australia
was significantly more than the number
of ones who were not native. In addition
, when it comes to gender, it can be seen that men who worked in Australia
during the given period were more than women, apart from 1996.
According to
the chart, native Australian doctors
form more than 50% of all doctors
in Australia
. However
, their number
was not similar in all 3 years. They were 60% in 1986 and 2006, and nearly 54% in 1996. In other words
, the gap between the proportion of native and international doctors
in 1986 and 2006 was 20%, which was halved in 1996.
In addition
, the number
of men who worked as a doctor, in 1986 and 2006 (nearly 54% and 51% respectively) was more than half, compared to women, who were less than half in those years (about 44% and 39% respectively). In the case of 1996, the population of female doctors
was roughly 10% more than male doctors
which formed approximately 45% of the total number
, regardless of their nationality.Submitted by Raeisinarges1995 on
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