The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
The table chart illustrates
that
the information Correct word choice
apply
of
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on
temperature
and time of daytime in London and Sydney the
same weekend in December 2018.
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at the
Overall
,from
the table Change preposition
apply
show
that London has Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
flucuated
maximum Correct your spelling
fluctuated
temperature
.Including minimum temperature
. In contrast
, Sydney has uptrend
both of maximum and minimum.
From London depict that information started from Correct article usage
an uptrend
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Friday
friday
28th sunrise at 08:05 and sunset Change the capitalization
Friday
15
:57
The maximum Change preposition
at 15
temperature
was 9 celcius
and minimum temperature
was 4 celcius
in the next following day the maximum temperature
significantly incresed to 13 celcius
. While
minimum temperature
reduced to 3 celcius
However
, in sunday 30th the maximum temperature
fell down to 10 celcius
but incontrast the minimum temperature
moderately rise to 5 celcius
On the other hand
,maximum temperature
from Sydney started from 26 celcius
at sunrise time 05:45 and sunset time 20:06 the maximum temperature
has slightly up to 28 celcius
in Saturday 29th. After that in sunday 30th maximum temperature
rise to 31 celcius
. In addition
minimum temperature
started from 17 celcius
and moderately rise to 18 celcius
in 29th in the next following day up to 19 celcius
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