Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) and instead support other areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government should finance public services

instead

of spending its

budget

on

arts

for

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painting, music, sculpture, and many more.

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in my point of

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i

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agree that investment in public services

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a very important role,

i

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think that spending

budget

on

art

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the art

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sector is

also

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crucial for

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society.

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with,

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dissagree

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disagree

with the statement because

arts

could develop our economic sector.

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, in each

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so many people have

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of

arts

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but with the limitation of

budget

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they can't expand their creativity.

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, an artist

could't

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couldn't

could

sell

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theit

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their

product through social media

because

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the lack of technology and

budget

.

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,

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the governments

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governments

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role to allocate its money

for

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the artist.

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, many

publlic

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public

facilities

that

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need to

build

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or

renovation

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. So, spending

budget

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on

that is

crucial.

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, the

convinience

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convenience

of society in using public facilities

are

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important.

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,

government

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the government

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should provide nice

sidewalk

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for

the

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pedestrian

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. Maybe

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that's

that

make

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people more agree on that. In conclusion, though

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agree that the government should allocate a large part of its

budget

on

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such

urgent needs of

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society like public services,

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think that

arts

, music, and theatre should

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also

alse

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also

be financed since they play an important role in

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peoples's

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development and

entertaiment

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entertainment