The diagrams below show the present college and its plan in 2025 as proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two
maps
provide information about the structure of the university in the present and in the year 2025. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that the form of the college will be extremely changed with new many rooms and car parks. Linking Words
Also
, the front door will be moved to the south side of the Linking Words
maps
in the future.
Looking at the details, the area will be fully changed from wide space to Use synonyms
be
neat college buildings. Unnecessary verb
apply
Footpath
, Correct article usage
The footpath
where
Correct word choice
which
become
the connection between Verb problem
is
parking
lot, university and bus stop on the main road, will be completely constructed to be abolished and for garden Add an article
the parking
also
have the same plan.
Compared to the Linking Words
future's
Change noun form
future
maps
, on the left side of the university will have two more spots for parking than Use synonyms
present's
Change noun form
present
maps
. On Use synonyms
left
side of the buildings, there are 2 classrooms and Add an article
the left
lunch
areaCorrect article usage
a lunch
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words maps with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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