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The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.

The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
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The table illustrates the temperature and
hours
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 of daylight in two countries which is
London
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 and
Sydney
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 in three days in December 2018.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the average degree in Australia was higher than in
London
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, and the duration of sunshine was
also
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 longer.
To begin
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 with, it can be seen that the temperature remained lower than 13, and the lowest was on 29th December in
London
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, which was only 3 degrees,
while
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 it was six times more than in
London
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 in
Sydney
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.
In contrast
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, the maximum degree in
Sydney
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 was 31 during the period,
whereas
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 it was much colder in
London
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, which was only 13 degrees.
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, because of the location, the time of sunrise in the UK was approximately 8 a.
m
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., and the sunset was 4 p.
m
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., which meant there were 8
hours
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 for people working;
however
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, the duration of sunshine in
Sydney
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 was 13
hours
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, which was more than 5
hours
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 in
London
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, and the time of sunrise and sunset was 6 a.
m
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. and 8 p.
m
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. respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, london, sydney, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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