The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The map diagram illustrates the public
library
floor plan over two decades compared to the present day.
Overall
, noticeable features that the library
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significantly more Correct your spelling
changed
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ans
adding some facilities.
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Firstly
, the CDs, videos and games room
has been expanded, which form to story events and child’s fiction books with sofa in the corner and next to the door. Next to the entrance on the left, before is
the reading Unnecessary verb
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room
, and now replaced with the computer space. Additionally
, the room
, which is the children
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children's
are
now the lecture Change the verb form
is
room
.Adult fiction books have been relocated to the other side of the library
, making place
for all the contemporary reference books.
On the right side of the entrance, making Add an article
a place
place
for the cafe area. And the tables and chairs which were previously in the middle of the map have been removed. On the right side of the Add an article
a place
library
, an information desk and some self-service machines have been erected.Submitted by mynonames on
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