You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Smith,
I hope you and your family doing well.I'
m
writing this
letter as I am hoping to visit
Goldcoast
during my summer holidays.It would be so much fun since we haven't seen each Correct your spelling
Gold Coast
others
for nearly Change to a singular noun
other
an
year.I'Change the article
a
m
planning to visit
Goldcoast
on 23rd
of January for 5 days and I will fly to Sydney on Correct article usage
the 23rd
28th
Correct article usage
the 28th
January
.
I'Change preposition
of January
m
just wandering
whether the time Correct your spelling
wondering
i'
Change the capitalization
I'm
m
spending in Goldcoast
,would it possible to stay at your place for couple
of nights since you're the only person I know in Change the article
a couple
Goldcoast
.That would be really appreciated if you could let me stay with you.I'm
more than happy to pay for my stay at yours if you accept.
As well as
i'
Change the capitalization
I'm
m
thinking of more adventuras
things if you and your partner would like to join Correct your spelling
adventurous
adventures
with
me Change preposition
apply
such
as visit
theme parks and Wrong verb form
visiting
to
Change the verb form
visiting
visit
some beaches and surfing like
we used to when were young.Let me know what your thoughtsReplace the word
as
.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
SamAdd a missing verb
are.
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to organize your writing into paragraphs, each paragraph should contain a single idea. This helps with the logical flow and clarity of your message.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is generally appropriate, but be cautious of informal expressions that may be too casual for the context of writing to a relative you may not know very well.
task achievement
The task is addressed, though you should ensure that each part of the prompt is fully developed. Expand on your explanations and requests for a higher score.
coherence cohesion
Use a consistent and suitable closing salutation. 'Yours faithfully' is typically used when the recipient's name is unknown; 'Yours sincerely' would be more appropriate in this case.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,