The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
The table compares the temperatures, and hours of daylight between
Sydney
and London
in December 2018. Overall
, it is clearly apparent that London
has lower
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a lower
temperature
and shorter
time getting Correct article usage
a shorter
sun light
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sunlight
compares
to Wrong verb form
compared
Sydney
at the same period of time.
Turning to the details, firstly
from 28th until 30th December the temperature
in London
was always below 15 degree
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degrees
celcius
. The hottest is Correct your spelling
celsius
in
Saturday 29th at 13 Change preposition
on
degree
but it Change to a plural noun
degrees
also
the coldest at night. The hours of Add a missing verb
is also
sun light
that Correct your spelling
sunlight
London
get
Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
had
not changed dramatically, Wrong verb form
have
its
about 8 hours per day.
On Correct your spelling
it's
contrary
, in a city called Correct article usage
the contrary
Sydney
, the temperature
was higher. In three days, start
from 28th to 30th December the Wrong verb form
starting
temperature
was always above 25 degree
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degrees
celcius
. It peaked two days before the end of the month at 31 Correct your spelling
celsius
degree
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degrees
celcius
, Correct your spelling
celsius
whereas
the lowest temperature
was in
Friday 28th at 17 Change preposition
on
degree
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degrees
celcius
. In Correct your spelling
celsius
Sydney
the sun rises at quarter to six and Add a comma
Sydney,
end
at about twenty past seven. which Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
resulting
longer Wrong verb form
results in
hour
of daylight.Fix the agreement mistake
hours
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