The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.

The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.
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The bar graph displays information regarding the frequency of fast food consumption dine-in from 2003 until 2013 by Americans.
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, the majority of Americans often eat fast food directly at restaurants within a time frame once a week or once or twice annually.
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the data, the
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2013 has the highest proportions with about 34% of people doing it once or twice a month each
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.
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, the
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2006 has a similar percentage up to 34% of Americans do it once a week. Looking at the information, two categories are consistently positioned in the middle. Both of them are several times a week and a few times a
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with about over 15% and 15% in the
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of 2013. Moving towards the other category, there are two categories that remain at the bottom with the lowest
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. The
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and never frequency made up less than 5%
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from the
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2003 until 10 years later.
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