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The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.

The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
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The presented diagrams inform the degree and duration of
sunrise
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 and sunset in two varied cities,
London
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 and
Sydney
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, from 28th to 30th
December
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 2018. In general,
London
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 is much colder than
Sydney
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 during
this
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 period, which at the same time, affects the daylight hours in both regions. Examining the details, the lowest degree in
London
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 was less than 5 on 29th
December
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,
whereas
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 in
Sydney
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, there was 17 on 28th
December
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.
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, if the maximum temperature in
Sydney
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 nearly reached 35 on 30th
December
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,
London
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 was unable to reach more than 15 on the previous day. Moving to the next table which explains the
sunrise
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 and sunset durations in these cities. The
sunrise
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 in
London
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 started approximately at 8 am and the sunset was at about 4 pm on three different days in
December
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 2018, so it was eight hours of daylight duration there.
On the contrary
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,
Sydney
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 had 15 hours longer daylight than
London
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 because the
sunrise
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 began at roughly 6 am and the dusk came at around 8 pm.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sunrise, london, sydney, december with synonyms.
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