The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates
medium
of earning of Correct article usage
the medium
australian
residents through seven different types of jobs namely, posted as managers, Change the capitalization
Australian
professionals
, semi
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semi-professionals
professionals
, tradepersons
, production, classical and labourers in Correct your spelling
tradespersons
trade persons
year
2003.
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the year
overall
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
females
working at
various posts kept fluctuating. it is apparent from the graph that Change preposition
in
highest
leading number of Correct article usage
the highest
females
were employed as clasical
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classical
whereas
most males
were seen working as tradepersons
.
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tradespersons
trade persons
Firstly
, males
hired as managers and professionals
were almost identical in numbers lying around 600 to 700. it is evident that posts like professionals
and clasical
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classical
were having
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had
least
differences between male and female counts. Correct article usage
the least
on the contrary
,tradepersons
and production Correct your spelling
tradespersons
trade persons
category
of employment noticed vast differences numerically among both Fix the agreement mistake
categories
sex
.
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sexes
On the other hand
,job profiles such
as labourers had almost 400 males
and nearly 300 females
compared to semi
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semi-professionals
professionals
consisting nearly
500 Change preposition
of nearly
males
and 350 females
. one of the key highlighting feature
was less than 200 Change to a plural noun
features
females
hired in tradepersons
and production jobs.Correct your spelling
tradespersons
trade persons
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Vocabulary: Replace the words professionals, tradepersons, females, males with synonyms.
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