the map represet school map in 1985 and now. describe it

the map represet school map in 1985 and now. describe it
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the map represet school map in 1985 and now. describe it
The left
map
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represents the
school
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map
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in 1985 and the right
map
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represents the current
school
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map
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. Past and present common elements, albeit in different measures, include
car
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a car
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park, office, several classrooms, and playing fields. There were major changes in the
school
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over the years. From both maps, one can observe that there are new features we can access,
such
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as a learning resources centre, a computer room which is part of the learning resources centre, a pool, a fitness centre, and some new classrooms that can accommodate more students. The
map
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above
also
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informs the change in
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school
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the school
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population. In 1985, the
school
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had 1500 students, and currently it can fit around 2300 students.
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, the entrance and the exit remain the same,
although
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the shape of the car park went from a rectangular to a half circle.
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, we can see that the library, the car park, and the classrooms beside the library have been removed and the playing fields have
also
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decreased in size.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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