the map show school map in 1985 & now, describe it
The left
map
represents the school map
in 1985 while
the right map
represents the current layout. Past and present common elements, albeit in different measures, include a car park, office, several classrooms, and playing fields.
There were major changes in the school over the years. From both pictures, one can observe that there are new features we can access, such
as a learning resources centre, a computer room which is part of the learning resources centre, a pool, a fitness centre, and some new classrooms that can accommodate more students. The map
above also
informs
the increase in school population from approximately 1500 students in 1985 to 2300 students as of now.
Verb problem
shows
Moreover
, the position of the entrance and the exit remain the same, although
the shape of the car park went from a rectangular to a half circle. Furthermore
, we can see that the library, the car park, and the classrooms beside the library have been removed while
the playing fields have also
decreased in size.Submitted by helma.devina on
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