The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The graphs indicate all the modifications that happened to Willington, a village, during centuries.

Overall

, the region has been more residential and it was accommodated by several facilities. Regarding the initial phase, what stands out from the scheme is that in 1780, it was mostly occupied by farmlands and woods.

However

, around 100 families used to live in

this

territory. Transition to 1860, it can be seen that all the vegetation and crops were removed with the aim of constructing more homes, 100 new ones.

Moreover

, a bridge was built in order to give access to local people to the other side of the river. More than

this

, a road was built on the northern side. Eventually in 2000, not only did an upturn take place in the number of homes, in the town but

also

equipped sports fields and two schools that were connected to residential area by a new road, taking up space from forest and crops.

Furthermore

, new shops were opened alongside the river toward the wetland.

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The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

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