The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

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The graphs indicate all the modifications that happened to Willington, a village, during centuries.

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, the region has been more residential and it was accommodated by several facilities. Regarding the initial phase, what stands out from the scheme is that in 1780, it was mostly occupied by farmlands and woods.

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, around 100 families used to live in

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territory. Transition to 1860, it can be seen that all the vegetation and crops were removed with the aim of constructing more homes, 100 new ones.

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, a bridge was built in order to give access to local people to the other side of the river. More than

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, a road was built on the northern side. Eventually in 2000, not only did an upturn take place in the number of homes, in the town but

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equipped sports fields and two schools that were connected to residential area by a new road, taking up space from forest and crops.

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, new shops were opened alongside the river toward the wetland.

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The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe that this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry payment and land. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Some people argue that the importance of public libraries is decreasing because of the technological development,so allocating national budget on them is a waste of money.To what extent,do you agree with this statement?