The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The bar chart illustrates the
number
of
Japanese
tourists
who travelled abroad between 1985 and 1995,
while
the accompanying graph shows the proportion of
Japanese
tourists
visiting Australia during the same period.
Overall
, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend. As seen in the above bar chart, the
number
of
tourists
traveling
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abroad between the years 1985 and 1995 has shown a continuous increase from approximately 5 million to 15 million. There was only a slight decrease in 1991, and apart from that year, no other period has witnessed a decline. In the line chart, it can be observed that in 1985,
Japanese
tourists
constituted 2% of Australia's total tourist market, and within 10 years,
this
value increased to 6% with fluctuations.
While
a significant drop was observed only in 1989, a minor decline occurred in 1994.
However
, there has been no decrease in the
number
of
Japanese
tourists
during the respective periods. In conclusion, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend in the
number
of
Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad and the proportion of those visiting Australia between 1985 and 1995
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japanese, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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