The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.

The bar graph illustrates the outcomes of

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research

of

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adult learning,

whereas

the circular chart shows data on how the expenses could be

devided

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divided

decided

. In overview, there is a variety of reasons why people are studying and the sharing of

expentitures

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expenditures

expenditure

of each and every subject.

To begin

with, the large percentage of about 40 per cent is for those who are clearly interested

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the course followed by 38%, and these ones

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wish to improve their qualifications in

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studies.

Furthermore

, there are some students who are schooling to get help for their new graft,

therefore

,

this

is represented by a maximum of 22%.

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, there

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also

both groups with the same percentage which are those who

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classes and the other ones seeking

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promotions at school.Meanwhile, the least number is from humans who just want to meet their family and colleagues at college which

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at 9 per cent.

Lastly

, money is

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divided into three different portions

such

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as

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Employer(35%), Taxpayer(25%)

as well

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Individual(40%).