The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university

did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the

salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant
The chart and table illustrate what Anthropology
graduates
from a particular university did after finishing their undergraduate degree and their salaries after five years of working. In general, most
graduates
got full-time
jobs
, and those working for the
government
earned the most, over $100,000 annually. Looking at the chart, about 52% of
graduates
chose full-time
jobs
. The second and third most popular choices were part-time work (15%) and pursuing a master's degree (12%). Those doing both postgraduate study and part-time work were at 8%. Unemployment was at 8%, and 5% had unknown statuses. Turning to the table, roughly half of the
graduates
in
government
jobs
earned more than $100,000, making it the top sector for high-paying
jobs
. Freelance consultants and private companies came next at 30% and 40% respectively. In the lower pay range of $25,000 to $49,900, private companies had the highest share at 5%, followed by freelance consultants and
government
jobs
, both at 5%.
To sum up
, most Anthropology
graduates
went for full-time
jobs
, and those in
government
roles had the highest salaries.
This
gives a clear picture of the career paths and earnings of these
graduates
.
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