The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures related to the amount of Ashdom
museum’s
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visitors
and the degree of their satisfaction before and after the repair are indicated in the table and the pie charts, respectively.
Overall
, the refurbishing process had a positive impact on the
number
of
visitors
and the quality of the visiting experience was explicitly improved. Having considered the data
regarding
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before the refurbishing span, 74,000
people
were interested in visiting the museum.
Moreover
, roughly half of the
people
(45%), both satisfied and very satisfied, were pleased by the experience.
However
, 50% of the charts
is
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are
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allotted to unsatisfied
visitors
, and the
people
who didn’t participate in the survey take a
miniscular
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miniscule
amount of 5%. Considering the numbers after the applied changes,
it is clear that
the
number
of
visitors
had increased considerably to 92,000.
Additionally
, the
number
of satisfied
people
swelled to 75% and
conversely
, the refurbishment brought about a significant drop of 30% in the
number
of dissatisfaction. The
number
of
people
who were without any ideas remained unchanged.
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