General Training Writing Task 1 Your loval hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your lettr: - Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give detais of when you would be availble for this work Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently, I saw an advertisement that
this
hospital needs people
to work without pay. Therefore
, I am writing this
letter to offer myself to participate in helping it. I am genuinely excited if I can fill my space-time with positive activities.
Helping people
who have limits in activities is part of my life. While
I was a student at University, I gained extensive experience to help people
in the various regions as a volunteer, such
as entertaining and teaching kids and taking care of the elderly. Moreover
, I am motivated to support people
who need help.
However
, I have no idea about what the position would be able to do, but I have understood a basic of first aid. Thus
, I will be ready to be placed in any position. Furthermore
, I am also
available to work at 5 p.m on the weekdays and 7 a.m on the weekends.
I am looking forward to your positive response and I will start to work soon.
Yours faithfully,
Edgar PSubmitted by misstiasclassroom on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure you have a clear introduction and conclusion, and that the body of your letter is organized with single ideas in each paragraph to maintain logical flow.
coherence cohesion
The letter would benefit from a rephrasing to fit a more appropriate formal tone, especially in addressing the recipient and closing the letter.
task achievement
Aim to elaborate more clearly on each point, giving specific examples or explanations for why you want to volunteer, the type of work you're interested in, and when exactly you are available.
task achievement
Proofread to fix errors with sentence structure, grammar, and especially check for appropriate use of formal language suitable for writing to a hospital.