General Training Writing Task 1 Your loval hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your lettr: - Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give detais of when you would be availble for this work Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir or Madam, Recently, I saw an advertisement that

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hospital needs

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to work without pay.

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, I am writing

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letter to offer myself to participate in helping it. I am genuinely excited if I can fill my space-time with positive activities. Helping

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who have limits in activities is part of my life.

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I was a student at University, I gained extensive experience to help

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in the various regions as a volunteer,

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as entertaining and teaching kids and taking care of the elderly.

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, I am motivated to support

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who need help.

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, I have no idea about what the position would be able to do, but I have understood a basic of first aid.

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, I will be ready to be placed in any position.

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, I am

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available to work at 5 p.m on the weekdays and 7 a.m on the weekends. I am looking forward to your positive response and I will start to work soon. Yours faithfully, Edgar P

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coherence cohesion

Ensure you have a clear introduction and conclusion, and that the body of your letter is organized with single ideas in each paragraph to maintain logical flow.

coherence cohesion

The letter would benefit from a rephrasing to fit a more appropriate formal tone, especially in addressing the recipient and closing the letter.

task achievement

Aim to elaborate more clearly on each point, giving specific examples or explanations for why you want to volunteer, the type of work you're interested in, and when exactly you are available.

task achievement

Proofread to fix errors with sentence structure, grammar, and especially check for appropriate use of formal language suitable for writing to a hospital.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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