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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.
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The two tables illustrate the net transaction of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in two different years between 1999 and 2004 in
UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and Sweden. The highest
sales
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 of coffee in 1999
was
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were
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 in
Denmark
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, reaching almost 2
million
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euros
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while
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 five years later, in 2004, UK coffee
sales
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 surpassed
this
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 record with
the
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an
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 income
approximately
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of approximately
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 20
million
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euros
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.
Denmark
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 and Sweden experienced a slight increase in their figures by 0.2
million
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euros
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 over the period, starting from 1.8
million
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euros
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 and 0.8
million
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euros
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, respectively, to 2
million
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euros
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 and 1
million
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euros
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, respectively. One of the prominent features of the second table is that, between 1999 to 2004 there was a dramatic increase in bananas
sales
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 in Switzerland, skyrocketing from 15
million
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euros
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 to 47
million
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euros
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.
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, Sweden and
Denmark
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 declined in their bananas
sales
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, dropping from 1.8
million
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euros
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 and 2
million
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euros
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 in 1999 to 1
million
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of
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apply
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euros
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 and 0.9
million
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euros
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 in 2004, respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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