The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.
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The graph illustrates the change in
population
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from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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people who live in
Washington
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had the highest number during the period,
while
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the
population
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in other cities was a slight increase.
To begin
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with, at the beginning of the period, 75000 individuals lived in
Washington
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,
whereas
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Columbia and
Yamhill
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had the same quantities and the growing trend, which were 30000 and 29000 respectively, which meant
Yamhill
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had the lowest
population
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of the three countries. After 30 years, residents in
Washington
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increased by 55000 to 125000;
however
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, Columbia and
Yamhill
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only rose by approximately about 15000, which was still less than 60000. In 2000,
Washington
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's inhabitants had a sharp increase, which reached a peak at 240000. It was two times more than in 1970.
In addition
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, the
population
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also
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rose twice in Columbia and
Yamhill
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, which were 90000 and 75000.
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  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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