The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
exports
in different sectors of Southland in 2000, present
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the present
year
and the prediction for 2025.
Overall
, the highest export earning
recorded from international tourism and dairy Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
products
in 2000 and also
are in
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this
year
while
lowest
amount of Correct article usage
the lowest
earning
recorded from meat Correct your spelling
earnings
products
.Only the international tourism sector
is predicted higher amount of exports
in 2025.
When it comes to the
international tourism, it earned just over 8 Correct article usage
apply
billion
from exports
in 2000. However
, the number of income is
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has
in
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apply
this
year
.Furthermore
, it may be anticipated that the earning
from Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
this
sector
will be increased to just below 9 billion
in 2025.On the other hand
,dairy product perspective, it can be noticeable that the sector
exported approximately 7 billion
worth products
in 2000 Change preposition
of products
while
it has been
risen to about 10 Unnecessary verb
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billion
in
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this
year
.Moreover
, the sector
aims 9.5
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for 9.5
billion
of
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exports
which seems a slight drop.
with regards to Meat products
, It can be seen that 6 billion
worth Change preposition
of earning
earning
in 2000.But, the amount has been Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
droped
to approximately 5.6 Correct your spelling
dropped
billion
in the current year
.Which also
has predicted exactly 5 billion
export income of this
sector
in 2025.Submitted by Praslah on
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