The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map given is planned locations for the construction of specific new restaurants in Paris. There are several completely different areas that are divided by a river which will be examined in the paragraphs below.
The first restaurant location is not far from the right bank in the northern area.
This
one new place is also
located in the western area of Park and Maritime Museum which has 8000 visitors a day. Not far from there, there is a facility to see fishes in the Aquarium on the eastern field which holds 2000 individuals for its daily visitors.
On the other side of the bridge and the river, the second location is planned to be placed in front of the park which is also
located on the Left Bank. It is obvious to see that this
new restaurant will stand next to the iconic Paris landmark, which is the Eifel Tower. There are also
some infrastructures in the western area where the sports centre and Bir-Hakeim Metro Station are built. Furthermore
, the second planned place is nearby to an art gallery where 750 people visit that building each day.Submitted by writingielts0 on
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