Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many parents and schools can see the benefits of using

smartphones

to support

children

’s learning process.

However

, introducing

such

development

to

children

leads to them using it on a daily basis. In my view,

this

should be perceived as a negative

development

since

smartphones

can affect

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children

’s cognitive

development

as well as

their physical well-being.

Firstly

, it will reduce

children

’s attention span.

This

is because almost all of the entertainment content in social media is frequently produced creatively in

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of short videos.

For example

, the videos on Tikok or Instagram are truly engaging with millions of options to see. In that way,

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it repeatedly every day can badly influence

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attention as they are more indulged

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seeing short-term information which

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them find it hard to read longer

informations

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without any interesting graphic decorations.

Secondly

, the bad impact

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overusing

smartphones

can

also

be seen physically. Every digital

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, including

smartphones

, contains high exposure

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radiation rays which can seriously affect our eyes to suffer from near-sigthtnessed.

Although

it is a common disease to everyone,

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allowing

children

to get much exposure

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radiation will higher the chance

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on optical

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an early age.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that these reasons outweigh the advantages of

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smartphones

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usage to

children

. Not only that

smartphones

hinder the crucial part

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cognitive

development

by reducing the attention span,

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children

’s eyesight will definitely be affected by radiation rays. To tackle

this

, the role of parents as the closest family members is somewhat crucial in setting boundaries regarding daily digital usage

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their

children

.